To allocate the resources and skills I have been given and/or acquired to share my love for the outdoors with everybody from all walks of life.
To be an innovative entrepreneur; creating a successful business to satisfy my customers to the greatest extent.
To share my enthusiasm and compassion for helping others who are less fortunate or underprivileged. Expressing my intrinsic morals as an outgoing and zealous leader, showing the world that you can make a difference whoever you may be.
I am here to create an environment where individuals can have fun no matter what your economic situation, skill level, physical/mental condition, or mobile capacity may be. I will promote outdoor leisure activities as an alternative to life’s struggles, forming a program/opportunity to get away from it all while taking in the beautiful outdoors.
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3 comments:
John, I like your vision statement, I think it is clear and that you are putting your prospective clients first. Putting your clients first is key to starting a successful business. Your value statement is good, but I think that you could look into being more specific in what you value. For example, you want to teach and make sure that your clients respect nature and are aware that it might not be around forever with pollution and building.
John, I think that your mission statement is very clear and concise, and I think that mostly everyone knows what you'll be doing after college just from reading it. I honestly don't see where your mission, vision, values or distinctive competencies are lacking, so I can't comment on that. But I think you did a great job at getting your point across in the right manner.
Hi John,
Here are some suggestions:
(1) read the comments from your peers
(2) Mission- try just "to share my love of the outdoors with people from all walks of life" but add a how component- address how you are going to meet THEIR needs
(3) Vision- to be an innovative entrepreneur in what industry?
(4) values- "helping others who are less fortunate or underpriviledged";
"You can make a difference whomever you may be"- these are both great value statements- do you have any more?
Distinctive competencies-what sets you apart from others in the industry? I think you could add "promoting outdoor leisure activities as an alternative to life's struggles" after "to be an innovative entrepreneur" and have a perfect vision statement
See me Sunday night in the emergency room with a second draft if you want any more help.
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